增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Jeff Van Gundy, head coach of the Houston Rockets, have a dream. He wants Yao Ming to be like other players, that are “selfish” and want the ball all time. Besides, Yao is a selfless person. The reason is that he has been brought up and train in this way. When he first arrive in America, Yao was an instant hit among basketball fans nationwide. They all loved this kind giant.
Gundy wants Yao to be aggressive and, if necessary, to be rude for his teammates. At first, Yao didn't really understand that what the coach wanted, but now she understands. Gundy said, “He has to be a little polite and rude”.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In a freezing cold day in January 1994, Jiesang Suonandajie found what he was looking for—a group of poacher who were killing the endangered Tibetan antelope. Jiesang knows he had to move quickly.He shouted to the poachers to put away their guns. Although being surprised,the poachers had a advantage there were more of them. In the battle what followed Jiesang was shot and killed. When its frozen body was found hours late, he was still holding his gun. He had given his life save the Tibetan antelope.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is my son’s birthday two days ago. As I didn’t buy any gift for him, I offered him with $10 as a birthday gift. Last evening he used it take his cousin out for ice cream. It turned out that these two kids were the last one in the shop for the day. But the lady at the register who wanted to cash out quickly told them their ice cream was freely! They were too exciting to hear it. Then I asked my son why he did with the money. To my joyful, he replied that he gave it to the homeless man.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Time flies! A year has past since I came to this school. Many colorful activities had been organized by our school. What impressed me most was a activity called "Learning to Farm". In an autumn afternoon, we were sent to a farm which we learned lo plant potatoes. Having been in the city for so a long time, we were so happy to go to the countryside. After divided into three groups, we started to work.Some students cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes, and others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. We continued doing that until all the work was done. Although we were exhausted, but we felt fulfilled on our way back home.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Three years before, like many another girls who were addicted to novels, I was crazy about original English novels. Despite of the fact that many people around me thought that I had no talent for foreign languages, for I often failed pass my English exams, I was determined to read one chapter the day. Though I often couldn't understand, 1 was confident just because I was interested in English novels. Finally, my perseverance pays off and I made a tot of progresses in English. This experience has made me firm believe that it really matters on my way to success is interest.
Interest does have a big influence on myself, which I think will without doubt benefit my future career.
