增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The Middle-Autumn Festival is one of traditional Chinese festivals to be hold in September or October. During the festival, family members get united but have mooncakes together. There are various kinds of it, such as bean paste, egg-yolk or meats. The shape of a mooncake is round as it symbolize a big moon. In addition to, in the evening of the day, people get together, eaten delicious mooncakes. Often, they also appreciate the beautiful moon what hangs in the dark sky. To conclude, the Middle-Autumn Festival is a very nicely festival for Chinese people.
增加：在缺处加一个漏字符合（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and our faces turned pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called a ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, they seldom care about the necessary safe measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope the whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend, my classmates and I participated in a picking activity on the Dongshan Farm, which turned out to being meaningful and unforgettable. A farm is famous and attractive, covered with a various of fruit trees and colorful flowers. Many animals are raised here as well. We divided into several groups in advance, but upon arrival, we got down to work immediately. Some picked peaches, some filled in the baskets and other carried them to the trucks. What a busy scene! We had a shortly break after lunch and then went on working until 5:00 pm. About 6:30 pm, we all returned to home, exhausted but happy. It is through this activity which I have realized how important teamwork is. I will benefit from this experience forever.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer, I go to my friend’s village and watched Qinqiang, a kind of opera once popular in Shaanxi and neighboring provinces around them. The atmosphere there were very lively and pleasant. Fortunately, Qinqiang has lost its popularity nowadays and many of the opera houses have been abandon. There seem to be various of reasons and the main one is what we have many other amusements to choose from. However, Qinqiang is one of most important cultural tradition in China. What can we do to keep this traditional culture from die out?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.格式正确, 且每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I still remember the first day I come to this new school. Everything was new to me，what made me realize I was no longer a little child. I had to depend on me. Luckily，I made several good friend. Their interests were similar with mine. I had great English teacher，Maggie. She let me know the important of English. So I decided to learn English hardly. Although it was very difficult at first，but under her instruction，I made rapidly progress. Just as the old saying goes，“Where there is a will，there is a way.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Bollywood, that is the name of the film industry in Mumbai, India, make almost 1,000 films a year. Since 1913, Bollywood has been made over 29,000 films. This is a much high number than Hollywood in the USA and means it is biggest film industry in the world. Most Indians enjoy watching films better than any other free-time activities like traveling or do sports. Ten millions people go to the cinema every day. Indian films are also warm welcomed outside India. Last year, Bollywood made over $500 million with selling its films to other countries. Indian actors make more films each year than American actors in Hollywood, and they are not paid so much.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we all know, culture is similar with an iceberg. There are cultural roles where are obvious and easily to understand. Most of our cultural values, however, is not clear or hidden. For example, when you will visit a restaurant in Japan, people may sit in the floor and use chopsticks to eat. These eat habits are easy to come across. You may not know, therefore, that it’s common for a man to sit cross-legged on the floor, but it’s not considered acceptable for woman to do so. You have to study people’s body language to understanding this less obvious cultural rule.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I really miss my hometown, which I lived until I was ten. So recently I decided pay a short visit. To my astonishing, the playground where I have a good time with my friends is now covered with buildings. The school I attended are no longer there and now it has become the supermarket. At that time, I always played football with several friend after class. No matter when the weather was like, we always played outside happy. And they developed lifelong friendship with each other which I value it greatly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the Internet becomes the more and more popular, some students can’t help play online games or chatting. It was not only a problem of wasting time, but also a seriously problem which does harm to their health. Which teachers should do first is to find out what makes them addicting to computer games. Lack of love from his parents? Poor test scores? Parents can have a heart-to-heart talk with them. Secondly, teacher should help them build up their confidence but make them interested in studies. Thirdly, find something else for them to do instead playing computer games.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线线（＼）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My friend Luo Ming had a disappointing look today. When I asked her the reason, she said that the winter vacation was going to be over soon and that she had to go back to school. Luo Ming doesn't do well in her studies but she isn’t interested on studying. I guess that’s how she doesn’t want go back to school. But I look forward to go back to school. I enjoy studying very much. It helps enrich her knowledge. After relaxing for more than twenty day in the cold winter , now I am full of a energy and can’t wait to study in the classroom again. I hope Luo Ming will one day finding the fun of studying,too.
