增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My family was very poorly when I was a child. My parents lost their jobs and lived with heavy pressure. As result, I wanted to studying hard so as to have a different future. During my high school life, I spent all my time studying those difficult subject, which made me one of the best students in our school. After graduation, I am admitted to a key university which I met a lot of interesting friends. Now, I am working on a big company but I am able to afford anything I want. What's more, my parents also have found out new jobs. So I believe that our dreams will come true if you try our best.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每次错误以及修改仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On Women's Day, my father and I planned to give my mother surprise. We did something specially for her. Know that she was always unwilling to buy herself anything, we decided to buy him a perfect gift. In the shop, the shop assistant introduced a beautiful necklace, what I thought was the very thing for my mother. However, we bought it without hesitations. The moment we take out the necklace, my mother was so surprising that she could not say a word. It's my great pleasure that my mother liked of the gift, and I hope my mother will be happy and healthy forever.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father goes fishing alone every Sunday. This morning when we were got up, it was fine. Father decide to go fishing, so mother stopped him, said that it was going to rain according to the weather forecast. She asked him to put off his raincoat, but he did not take her advices. When he got to the river, it was cloud. Soon the rain began to fall heavily and he was caught in it. After she got home, he was wet. “Did you catch some fish?” asked my mother. “No, but I caught bad cold.” he answered.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday afternoon, my parents and I go to the supermarket near my home to buy some food. On the way back to home, I saw several teenager of my age wandering aimlessly around the square. They were shaking with cold and looked as if they were very hungry. It was so a cold night that I felt pity for him. I remembered the food we had bought and give it to them. Then we walked home silent. I felt happy to be able to give others hand.
My parents also felt very proud at me. They said we should do all we could to helping those who are in trouble.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Like many boys, my favorite sport is playing basketball. To be honest, I felt clumsily when I first learned to play it because I wasn’t as energetic as another, and I moved slowly. And I was determined not to left behind. I spent my spare time to practicing it. Gradually, I made progresses. I can’t forget how exciting I was when I scored points for the first time. And I can still remember the joy of victory after win a match. That’s why I fell in love with basketball. Since then, it had become part of my life. It strengthens my body and mind. It also helps me become more confident and strong-willed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线( __ )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The forest of my hometown is beautiful no matter how the season is. I was driving this morning while I saw a deer live in the woods appear in the middle of the road. I came to the full stop, and we stared each other. He seemed clever. He had been in this world for some month and I didn’t want to end in his life. Finally, I waved my hand for him to go on. Having seen anything to fear, he jumped across the road. I drive on smiling at the magic of this moment and was thankful that I had been going slow not to hit this beautiful creature.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday afternoon several friend invited me to go to the movies. Just as if I was getting ready, my dad suddenly reminded me that it was my aunt’s birthday and that my whole family was going to celebrate his birthday. I was very angry for not let me go with my friends. So my father and I quarreled about.
Now I am really sorry for which I did. I have realized that family always comes first. It is sure that it was not the last chance I had to see my friends. So I can see my friends at any time and not that day. That’s a specially day to my aunt. I loved my aunt.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There is an old man who have a shoe repair shop outside our community and his shop always opens till midnight. Many neighbor wonder why he works so late since there are a few customers at that time. One cold and snow night, I went home such late that the street lamps had already gone out. When I was approaching my community gate, I spotted the old man sitting on a chair. On his hand, there was a lamp. Heard someone coming, he lifted his lamp light the way. I final understood him. He doesn't do it for money, but offers help to these who need it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My classmate Liu Ming succeeded in rescue a child from a burning house last Wednesday's morning. He was about to go to school while he heard a child crying. Looking around, he noticed a house burning fierce. Realizing a big fire had been broken out and a child was in danger, he called the police immediately. But he rushed into the burning house - searching for the crying child. The moment Liu Ming rushed out for the burning house with the trapped child, the house falls down. Liu Ming has set good example for us and we should learn from her heroic deeds.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was cold and rainy in yesterday. Standing at a bus stop on Jiner Road, I notice that an old man didn’t have a hat and an umbrella. Without delay, I went up and gave her the umbrella I carried with me. As the result, I was caught in the heavy rain. Unfortunately, I was entirely wet when I got to school. To my great happy, my head-teacher and classmates thought high of me the moment they knew about my kind act. It was not until then when I realized giving was joyful than I had thought. I will try my best to help those which are in need in the future.
