增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is the happy day in this holiday. Although I was very tired, but I found myself in these busy days. Usual, I am afraid of taking a bus. The awful smell of the bus drives me mad, make me feel carsick. But today I did feel carsick. I could defeat carsickness finally. At night I went out with an old friend I ever liked him, but all of us were so busy with examinations at high school that we hadn't been together. I was such surprised when I received his call that I could hardly believe my ears. At first, I think we would never meet before we graduated. Thank him for giving me a happy day!
There are lots of experience in our life.The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year.I'm interested in English.When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation.I was determined to win the first prize.I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything.Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally, I do a good job.
When I heard I got the first prize, my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition, I understand that it is confidence which makes people successfully.
Nick Vujicic, without arms or legs by birth, is the very person I've been admiring. Disabled as he is, he has been proved to the world that he can live as rich and full a life as normal person. He never sits around feel sorry for himself. On the contrary, owing to his optimism, not only has he succeed in caring for himself, but he also graduated with Griffith University. That inspires me most is that he has even started an organization called LifeWithoutLimbs to help other like him achieve their dreams.
On his life journey, Nick has sought after the best yourself despite his disabilities. Similar, we are what we are, not what we were or what we will be. Cherish the present.
My friend Henry has a most unusually hobby (爱好). He likes plant flowers in strange places. When the spring comes round, you can always tell Henry had been busy working because the dirty side of canals (沟渠) and railway banks suddenly became filled of flowers. In his spare time, with pockets full of seeds, Henry goes round by his bike. He has a long pipe with him blow seeds into places that is hard to reach. When his flowers fade (凋谢), he goes round again to collect its seeds. In this way he always has a big supply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（x)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On Mother's Day,Tom stopped his car outside a flower's shop.He wanted to order some nice flowers and ask a shop to deliver them to his mother.He was about to enter the shop while he saw a little girl crying by the roadside.Tom asked her for what had happened.The girl said she wanted to buy a rose for her mother,and had no money.Hearing this,Tom went in and bought a beautifully rose for the girl.Then he offered to drive her home,but she insisted she was going to another town by bus to send the rose to mother.Tom was so touching that he changed his mind.After driving her to the bus station,he returned to the shop,buy a large bunch of flowers, and drove all the way to his mother.He would give the flowers to his mother with person.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am David. As a eighteen-year-old student in Senior 3, there have always a new challenge just around the corner! At times they can be quite stressful, which in turn makes me feel very worry. In order to help deal this, I go jogging as often as possibly. Whether I’m at the gym and on the road, my nervous energy push me through mile one. By mile two, the tension has moved from my mind to my leg. By the end of the run, all my stress has been disappeared and I am ready to meet more challenges with confidence the next day!
Planning is good as it decides in details how we do what we want to do it. However, a plan bear no fruit without being actual carried out. My experience in the English speech contest last month is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours work out a schedule with my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practicing in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally stood out among the rest as a first prize winner. I know why I achieved my success. It came from good planning but better practice.
Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards it may make difference. I still remember how my spoken English was improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid make mistakes. Before long my teacher got to know about his situation, he encouraged me to speak out that I thought. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging, my teacher and my classmate would help me to find out my problem. I also joined in an English club to get more chances to speak. Practice makes perfect. Now I can talk fluent in English. Just as the saying went, “Every bean has its black.”Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Learning from mistakes, and success is just waiting for us.
On my way to the bookstore, I noticed a group of people were surrounded two anxious foreigners. I stopped and found that they were tourist from Canada who careless left a very important wallet in a taxi. Then I accompanied them to the nearest police station and without the police’s help, we got in touch with the taxi company. We told that a driver had just turned in a wallet and then a policeman drives us to the company without delay. The two Canadians happily claimed their wallet, that contained their passports, flight tickets, some cash or credit cards. At last, they expressed our thanks to me. I feel it is really a great pleasure to help the others.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, Sally went to work by the taxi. Unfortunately, when she arrived her office, she realized that she has left her bag in the taxi.
She became worried because in the bag was the material needing for the meeting to be held in an hour.
Half an hour late, she received a call from a man, told her that he was sending the bag to her in person. Wondering where the man knew her address and telephone number, Sally went downstairs. It was actually the driver which taxi she had taken. The driver told Sally that he had found his business card in the bag so that he could find Sally. Sally expressed her thank to the driver and hurried upstairs, heading for the meeting room.
