Nowadays, some famous tourist attractions are crowded of tourists during the holidays, which makes it possible for tourists to enjoy themselves. It reflects the fact what it is difficult to travel to crowded tourist attractions. Therefore, to travel in the holidays made no sense. That is why many people prefer to stay at home rather than to go out. In my opinion, the government should devote its energies to relieve the stress of tourist attractions. Some effective measure can be taken. For example, the number of tourists to famous tourist attractions should limited and citizens should not travel at a same time. Only in this way can tourists enjoy our holidays.
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I am writing to express my thank for your company while I was on this summer camp, which was the unforgettable experience for me. Through visit American universities, I got a good knowledge of them in some way, which broadened my horizon and introduce me to more about American culture. Besides, during the summer camp, I made some American friends, that gave me lots of assistance. Moreover, in an environment exposing to English language, my English listening and speaking skills great got improved. Would you like join the summer camp in China in next summer? I'll be your best guide and you can experience tradition Chinese culture. I'm looking forward to your coming.
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2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The person I would like to interview him is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only one of the greatest astronaut in the world but also the first Chinese go to space. I have long been interesting in space exploration. And I believe I could learn a greatly deal from him about it. If I could interview him, I would ask him that made him become an astronaut or how he was trained. I would also like to know how he feel in space and whether space travel is as exciting as what is describing in some books. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about their personal life, which must be very different.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
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注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Looking back on my senior school life, I have so many things to share them with you. I still remember I step into my high school with high expectations. Therefore, I felt so frustrated after the first month test. I even began to doubt that I was qualified to be a senior school student. With the helps of friendly classmates and teachers, I picked up my courage and regained the spirits to devote myself to my study, thus do well in some academic performances. Besides, I took active part in colorful after-school activities, on which I benefited a lot. In a word, I am now satisfied with my senior school life which are part of my growth.
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning, I was jogging in the park while I caught sight of a wallet on a bench. Clear, someone had left it there in accident. I picked up and checked the contents. Inside it, I found some money or a card with a phone number. Believing that the owner would be worried, I immediately try the number. A man answered it in an anxious voice. Hearing that I had his wallet, he sighed with relief and told me he would come right away. Ten minutes late, the man arrived. After confirm he was the owner, I returned the wallet back to him. With his thumb up, he expressed his thank to me repeatedly. Seeing the smile on his face, I felt happy that I was able to help.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Watch the Chengdu Universiade was incredible experience in this special summer holiday of Senior 3. The athletes were amazing, but the atmosphere was electric. Seeing the track and field athletes showcase our strength and the swimmers glide through the water was really inspired. The cheers from the crowd made it even much exciting. The Universiade also celebrate the diversity of different culture and brought people together. It was true unforgettable to witness the talent and determination of these young athletes. I feel so lucky as to have been part of such a remarkable event.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend has witnessed my active participation in the community service with my classmates, the theme of it was “Caring for the Elderly”. As scheduled, we arrived at the nursing home on the morning, where we helped mop the floor, dust the furniture and clean all the window there. After that, we made dumplings for the elderly, chat together happily.
Exhausted although I was, it was rewarding and meaning to see the smiles on their faces. Not only did I bring joy to them, but also I found confidence in keeping themselves company. It is the voluntary labor which enables me to understand what Chinese traditional virtues are. To be frank, I have benefited it greatly.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The day before yesterday, I went to the bookstore where is near our school to buy a reference book. It was Saturday, so there was many people. Under the help of the shop assistants, I quickly got the book I needed. I was about to leave when I found someone trying to steal a man’s money. Although I was nervous, but I tried to think of a way to help. Suddenly, a good idea came me. I stepped on the man’s foot on purposes. As I expected, the man’s scream gives the thief a fright, whom quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to him.
Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I went to visit my beloved grandmother, that is already in her seventy. She took care of myself when I was in primary school. Delighted to see me, she held my hands and hurry to bring me something delicious. Heard that I would be a senior three student soon, she told me not be nervous and that everything would be OK. Then she also stressed that study and healthy were equally important. Feeling so warmly, I promised her that I would make full preparations for the coming entrance examination both physical and mentally. I firmly believe that I will get satisfying results the next year.