增加：在缺词 处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Many people, sometimes myself including, tend to judge a person by his appearance.
I was afraid of my uncle who has a scary tattoo on his arm till my mother told me a “story” .When I was three-year-old naughty boy, I always ran around the neighborhood with my toy saber. Unfortunate, one day I hit a wild dog on accident. The dog became crazy and try to bite me. It was at that time when my uncle appeared and protected me with her strong arm. However, this accident left a scar on his arm. My uncle went to get a tattoo in order to cover up the scars. From that moment, he is my hero but instead of a bad looking uncle.
So we need to go beyond people's looks and focus on more internal spirits in order to truly judging a person.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
About three years ago, I was playing my violin at a nursing home and one of the workers asked if she could play it. I said sure. She took a card of hers and I never thought over her again.
Last week, this woman call me. Her sister gave her a violin for Christmas. She had kept my cards all these years. She wanted me to introduction a violin teacher to her. So I was referred her to my violin teacher. And I invited her over see my violins and she came over. She had a happily visit. She said she had always wanted to play a violin since she was very young and whether our interaction a few years ago inspired her even more.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, I had drove my car to see a doctor. At the hospital parking lot, I tried to back the car into the space, and failed. I just got my driving licenses and was not skilled at operating it. As more cars lining up behind me and some drivers even yelled at me, I got nervously and worse at handling it. When I was about to quit and left, a man walked up to me. She offered to back my car. Then he suggested equip the car with a camera so that it would be easy to park it. I was relieved that he lent me hand and I was grateful for which he had done for me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday evening Alice was busy prepare for her tomorrow’s test when suddenly loud noises came into her room. Her neighbor was watching football match on TV in his room.The noises were so loudly that she couldn’t go on studying. She covered her ear with her hands, try to keep the noises out, and it was no use. Alice got impatient.
So she has to go to explain his difficulty. After hearing that she said, her neighbor apologized and turned down the TV immediately. Alice thanked to him and went back to continue her study.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once upon a time there was a rich man. He had a lot of money, but he felt unhappy all the times. Finally, the rich man left home to look happiness. He visited many places and met many rich men. All of them said they were not happy, too. On his way to home, the rich man saw a farmer work in the field. He went up to the farmer and asked, “Could you tell me if you feel happy?” “Yes, I’m quite happier. I always feel satisfying about everything in my life,” the farmer answered. “Please tell me how you find happiness,” asked the rich man. The farmer answered with a smile on his face. “It’s very easy of me to answer the question. If you work hardly, have three meals a day and go to bed early with worries, you’ll be the happiest man in the world.”
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In the evening of Feb.4th, my brother suddenly became unconscious. He sent to hospital and it turned out that she had a severe brain disease. When he finally came back home, we did that most families would do. We tried to help him as many as we could. One afternoon, he was at home alone for a few hours. When we returned, all the furnitures in his bedroom had been rearranged. My mom asks in surprise,“Who did that?” My brother replied delighted, “Me.” At that moment, we were all greatly amazed that he recovered a lot of and had the strength to moving things.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday, one of my colleague expressed her wish to reading The Little Prince. This is the five year that we’ve worked together. So I decide to make her wish come true. I went to a bookstore after work to look for book, imagining her reaction when she discovered it on her desk the next morning. The next morning, I arrived early at the office than usual so that nobody would see me secret leaving the book on her desk. This small gesture really made me happy. She thanked for everyone in our office. How a pleasure it is to help her realize her dream!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Growing up, I was lucky to have parents which taught me lessons by how they lived each day. I remember walking to a nursing home with my father on one Saturday. When we arrive there, I asked him for money for the collection box. My father reached into her pocket and handed me a coin. I was embarrassing by the amount of money he gave me so I asked him for more. In reply, he taught me an valuable lesson: What is importance is the reason for giving, not how many money you give. Years late, I found out my father didn’t have any spare money give at the time, but he always gave what he could.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Postcards always spoil my holidays. Last summer, I go to Italy. I visited museums and sat in public gardens. A friend waiter taught me a few word of Italian. Then he lent me an book. I read a few lines, but I did not understand a word. Every day I thought about postcards. My holidays pass quickly, but I did send cards to my friends. On the a last day I made a big decision. I got up early and buy thirty seven cards. I spent a whole day in my room, but I did not write a single cards!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a younger sister and his name is Xiaomei. She is a youngest member of my family. She was small, but she is the most important member of my family. Everyone love her a lot. Xiaomei is a very much good student. She is in the second grade, but she is so smart. She can learning anything very quickly. She often likes to go the kitchen to help Mom with the cooking. She loves dancing and singing song. She always fills the entirely house with laughter. She is the treasure of my family.
