增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Nov 4th, we took a bus to Flower Planet and take part in some group activities. At noon, we began to make wontons (馄饨) together. After a while, the plate was filling with wontons of different sizes and styles that we had made. One of my classmate brought the wonton plate to a kitchen and began cooking. When she carried the plate back, we were so eager see the fruits of our labor that we all gathered around him and instantly felt hungry. We could hardly wait for to put the wontons into our mouths. I ate them in such a hurry which I couldn’t even taste anything, and I still ate with great delight.
It was real a meaningful trip.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Swimming has been my favourite sports since I was young. At that time, I was often took to a pool to practice swimming by my mother. Whenever I saw my mother to dive into the swimming pool, I couldn’t help follow her bravely. Gradually, I became interested in swimming. The reason that I like swimming is that I feel it fun to swim. Besides, I consider them a good way to reduce my stress. I feel extreme relaxed when I swim in the water. What’s more, I became stronger and stronger because of the frequent swimming. In word, swimming is good for us. So, let’s swim together and stay health.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;.把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I strongly call on everyone to stop feed animals improperly in natural scenic areas. My family and he just went on a trip to the city park which there are beautiful lakes, streams and plants. Therefore, I found that many tourists fed the ducks, fish and other animals in the park with snacks they bring. In my an opinion, such behaviour will have a negative effect with both the animals and the environment.
Food made for human-beings may contain too many salt and fat, which can cause seriously health problems if animals eat too much. Also, food thrown into the lakes or left on the ground could regarded as pollutants and it will further destroy the living condition of animals.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One morning, I was cleaning the storage room but saw my skateboard. I took it out and wiped away the dust. Unconscious, I put my foot on it and tried to get back that feeling I had for the first time I rode it. But since so much time had passed, it didn’t come easily. I was so disappointing that I couldn’t find a point of balance. I grew frustrated. It took me several years to learn how to skateboard, but it took so few years forget all of these skills.
I start with the basics and tried over and over again. As you concentrated on the board,I found it quite magically that all I was thinking was about how to skateboard well, instead of comparing my skills now and before. Hour later. I found that my ability had returned.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I know that a Chinese painting exhibition hold by the local government is about to kick off in the art gallery. Now I want to apply to the voluntary job. Firstly, I’m proficient in English, but I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Secondly, I am so responsible and outgoing that I can get along well with other. What’s more, I am a lot of more experienced because I work as a volunteer in our local museum 3 months ago. Most importantly, I have good knowledge of Chinese art, which enables me to introduce Chinese paintings to visitor clearly and expertly. I think I am suit for this job. I would appreciate it whether you could give me a chance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember my first day of school when I am introduced to the concept of labor education. At the first, I didn’t understand what it was necessary for us to learn how to plant trees and fix things around the school. However, as I participated in these activities, I gradual appreciated the value of learning practical skills. Not only did it teach me the importance of team works and responsibility, but it also allowed me gain a sense of satisfaction. I am grateful with the opportunities that school labor education provided to me, but the lessons I learned will always stay with me. Overall, I believe that experience labor activities is beneficial for myself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I planned to save money for a trip. My father told to me a local zoo was looking for teenagers to work on the weekend, so I immediate applied for the position. To my delight, I got. My first tasks was to clean the elephant’s house. Luckily, another girl who had begin working there two weeks before taught me how to do a job and that helped me a lot. Each weekend, I was sent to work with difference animals. What I liked best were feeding the giraffes. Tiring as I was while work hard at the zoo, I felt happy because I got close to animals and I also earned a lot.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays the Chinese language is becoming increasing popular. It is reported that about 25 million people were currently learning Chinese as a second language. Today I’d like to share some of my advices on ways to learn Chinese well. Firstly, you need practice as often as possible, not just in school and beyond the classroom, too. Secondly, if you are having trouble at unfamiliar words, try thinking about the context in that the words are used. That might help you guess out the meaning. Finally, I recommend that you read the great number of short stories and novels rewrite in simple Chinese. With sufficient language input, I’m sure you can learn Chinese effectively.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, I was left alone at home, struggle with my history homework. To seek inspiration, I decided to hang out. I was wandering around the town center while I discovered a museum. Walking in, I saw some ancient fishing equipments on display. Then I went one floor up. That drew my attention were some old tape machines I have never seen before. Fascinated by its mystery, I listened to a lively introduction of their history. On the three floor, there was a unique prehistoric painting. But regretful, I wasn’t allowed take pictures. Anyway, the museum not only offered me with a source of inspiration but a place to relax.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号/\,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m fond of travelling. In my opinion, it’s very interesting explore new places and experience different cultures. I had been to several cities both at home or abroad so far. Of all trip I’ve taken, the best one what I made deep impression on was the trip to London two years ago. I was attracted by its remarkable architectures, especial London Bridge. Besides, I had my English greatly improving by communicating with native English speakers during the week-long trip. I found people there was friendly to me and willing to introduce the history of the city. In a word, not only did I academically benefit a lot of but also I physically and mentally felt relaxing.
